La redacció
Ens han manat fer una redacció en anglès. Tema: expectatives de futur. A nivell personal i general. Tinc interès sobre què pensaran de la meva. L'exposo a continuació. Demano disculpin errors sintàctics. També demano disculpin el to.
Redaction: my expectations for the future
Well, what can I say about this topic? Firstly, maybe, I recognize I’m a pessimistic person. But I am not pessimistic without any reason. No, I’m pessimistic because I’m realistic. Anybody can see the world situation today, look around him and think: “things are not like they should be”.
Ten years from now, I think I will have finished my studies and I will be living in the same place that now. Maybe –probably– I’ll have applied for a mortgage that I will have to return to the bank in 80 years –so my son will have to return it!–. I hope I’ll be working in a job that I like it. But perhaps my salary will be low.
My country will continue being the same –Spain– but it won’t be like now. It will be quite full of buildings and there will be neither forests nor nice landscapes. Many people will have earned a lot of money constructing, but many others will be hungry.
In the world things will be like in Spain. There will be a lot of population, enormous cities and pollution in the Earth and in the space around the Earth. Probably we will be living on the Moon or in Mars, but nothing will be better than now. This, in the case that the things ARE. Because perhaps some stupid politician will have erased us of the universe.
Well I’m pessimistic. It’s better to think about the present.
Thanks to Ya Ves! to correct my horrible faults. The corrections have been marked with Bold.
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yaves dijo
First of all, I can't let you do some faults, so...
Think about the difference between pessimist and realistic: they are both names, they are not adjectifs, so... why don't you use pessimis-tic??
Auxiliar whithout to! (should to...!)
There is a sentece without subject: Probably will be living in the Moon ... (sorry, you refere inside the Moon? :-D
At least, I agree with you in some aspects of your explanation, but there is no hope! Perhaps some diseases will have a cure, perhaps in 2 or 3 years people won't be able to pay the prices of flats, lots of people who works building flats will be increasing the rate of unemployment so they would sell their flats to pay its meal, banks would be owners of these flats and so on...
Perhaps future is here...
Kisses ;-)
P.D.: Sorry for faults..
9 Diciembre 2006 | 10:09 PM