Una altra redacció
Ya, another redaction, this time about the doping (buff). No sóc responsable de l'opinió expressada. I, un cop més, AGRAIRÉ qualsevol correcció.
Redaction: is doping a big problem in sports?
The doping. A topic of current importance in sports that is only treated from one perspective. Almost all the mass-media blame the doped players. When a team find a doped player, immediately the team expels this player. But nobody thinks: “if he was taking drugs it wasn't for taste”. In the competitive world of sports, specially in high-competition sports, players are forced to get results, good marks.
If a sportsman is mediocre, he won't get much fame. Because of that, many times some sportsmen don't have any other way than the doping. In other times not even they themselves know what they are taking. In cycling, for example, it's easy that the team's doctor prepares the drinks that the cyclists take, and they don't know what they are drinking.
How to control the doping? In first place, avoiding impertinent accusations. And, in second place, reconsidering a too competitive system. When football, swimming or tennis stopped being simple sports to pass being a competition, the final goal wasn't to win, but it was to be better than the other one. In this context, a lot of people would do anything to win, and the doping is one of this things.
In fact, this type of sport is a good reflection of the society: we're ever running and running and fighting among us to arrive first at the same place.


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yaves dijo
Llevo unos días dándole vueltas y yo diría que la cosa es "doping" y no "the doping". Y ahora, mirando por intenet, he encontrado que the doping se usa para concretar, por ejemplo: the doping crisis, the doping journal. No sé, mira tú lo que te sale en google cuando pones "about doping" y "about the doping", a ver si entiendes lo mismo que yo.
Lo demás, a simple vista, me parece que está muy bien. No he visto auxiliares con "to" ni palabras mal escritas.
Por cierto, no eres responsable de la opinión expresada en una redacción escrita por ti? :-?
Un beso,
7 Enero 2007 | 02:19 PM